Changing direction

There are times when choices need to be made. I’ve been struggling with making a choice between continuing with my writing and moving on to something else. Having given many years dedicated to learning and honing the craft, with all the time, effort, and finances required, I took stock. In light of the dauntingly slim odds of being accepted by an agent or publisher, I can’t justify continuing down this path at this time. The rejection letters I receive tell me that I write well, but . . . , and best wishes . . .  Writers, coaches, and tutors say, “Keep writing, keep submitting, others have succeeded and you can, too!” But when you realize that an agent regularly receives 7,000 queries and accepts only one, (other agents, similar statistics) the chance of being the one rather than one of the 6,999, is not one I can afford. This lotto ticket costs too much for me right now.

I’ve decided to move on to another love of mine. I found a volunteer position helping in a first grade classroom as a reading tutor. I’m a former teacher and my years in kindergarten and first grade were among the happiest. So being back with young children, assisting them as they learn to read, has put a smile on my face and a spring in my step! The “odds” of being successful just went up significantly. I can successfully share my love of reading, of stories, of all language arts. The children’s success will be all the reward I could ask for.

Maybe someday I’ll write again. The door is closed, not locked. In the meanwhile, I’m off to school again!

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Secondhand Charm – A Review

Do we all have magic within us and dreams beyond the possibly mundane expectations of others? Evelyn knew nothing of the special powers she’d inherited from her deceased parents but she did know that she had a gift for healing. She wanted to pursue studies at the university to become a physician. Secondhand CharmShe was from a small town, without resources, but when the king visited for a festival, she was honored for her scholarship and granted her wish. The road to the university city was fraught with dangers though: highwaymen, thieves, murderers, and then a ship that capsized. More treacherous yet, was the friendship of a woman who shared her hidden powers. The path to our dreams is not smooth but learning from experiences, even missteps and mistakes, can prepare us for following that inner urge to become our best selves. Evie discovered intrigue, romance, adventure and courage on her journey. Secondhand Charm is an earlier book by the talented, award-winning author of All the Truth that’s In MeJulie Berry.

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The Orchestra Pit – A Review

Orchestra PitI’ve never been fond of snakes, but the long, green, polka-dotted snake that slithers through The Orchestra Pit made me think twice about my previous aversion. He’s actually rather sweet. Alas, the story opens with a problem, as stories often do. Snake has a feeling he’s in the wrong pit. Did you ever have a feeling in the pit of your stomach that something wasn’t right? You’ll instantly identify with snake. He’s in the orchestra pit, where he doesn’t exactly belong. But then again, as long as he’s there, he might as well look around. In the most creative way, snake introduces us to the different instruments in the various sections of the orchestra as he winds his way around. Of course, he’s spotted (pun intended) and has to hide. When the conductor arrives and the players tune up, the racket sends snake heading for home. Lo and behold, the zoo is next door and so, snake finds his own true snake pit. Three cheers, or toots, to author-illustrator, Johanna Wright! Everyone will love snake and his story, but music teachers might want to take a look at this excellent picture book!

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Death by Toilet Paper – A Review

Donna Gephart has done it again! Every one of her middle grade novels are great reads Death by Toilet Paperand this one is no exception! Death by Toilet Paper, also gets the prize for Best Title, (according to me). How could a kid not pick up this book? And it only gets better once the story starts.

Donna won the prestigious Sid Fleischman Humor Award for her first book, and humor is a hallmark of her writing, but this tale has very serious issues as well. The main character, Ben, lost his father recently, after a terrible struggle with cancer. Now his mother tries to hold down a low-paying waitress job while she studies for an accounting degree. There’s little food on the table, they have to buy the cheapest, most awful toilet paper, and the rent is overdue, in fact, they face eviction.

Ben, a whiz at winning slogan contests, enters them almost daily. He’s won lots of prizes, but desperately needs to win a grand prize cash award if he’s going to save the day. Since nothing like that ever arrives in his mailbox, he tries selling candy at school. Though he’s successful as an entrepreneur, his business gets him into trouble, and then even worse trouble when a bully attacks him and steals the money.

Though down, he’s not out. Ben and his best friend, Toothpick, decide to enter a costume contest. Ben makes a wedding dress out of toilet paper and Zeyde, his grandfather, volunteers to wear it for the contest. With hairy arms and legs, even hairy ears, Zeyde is the perfect model. To top it all off, Toothpick uses his talent with horror-type make-up and gags to give the “bride” an exposed jaw and brain (on his bald head). After all, the contest is sponsored by the Mutter Museum, a medical museum with plenty of exhibits to challenge the faint of heart. Will Zeyde, who is showing early signs of dementia, have a good day and be able to make it through the judging? Will they win the grand prize? Will Mom pass her accounting exam? Will they be able to stay in their apartment, the only home Ben remembers, the one filled with memories of his dad?

This book will touch many emotions as it brings us a family dealing with issues faced by many of today’s kids: loss of / separation from a parent, memory-loss in a beloved grandparent, poverty, homelessness. It’s real. It’s genuine. And yet it’s funny. A book to be read, characters to be remembered, a story with an abundance of love.

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All Four Stars – A Review

All Four StarsTara Dairman is a world traveler, playwright, and author of the terrific middle grade novel: All Four Stars. In this book, (written, according to Ms. Dairman’s website, “in a mall in Brazil, a guesthouse in Morocco, and coffeehouses in Argentina, Cameroon, Gabon, and Tanzania”) eleven-year-old Gladys Gatsby, hands in a sixth-grade writing contest assignment, on something she is passionate about, that changes her life.

Her passion is food. Her parents are the world’s worst cooks, so Gladys buys her own groceries, prepares delectable dishes for herself, and hides the evidence before her parents come home from work each day. That is, until she uses her dad’s blow torch to put the finishing touches on her crème brûlée and sets the kitchen curtains on fire–just as her parents walk in. Banned from the kitchen for six months, Gladys focuses on her true passion. She wants to be a restaurant critic for the New York Standard. And that’s what her contest writing assignment was about. Unbeknownst to Gladys, her entry went astray, mistaken for an application to be a food critic. The woman in charge of that section of the newspaper invites G. Gatsby to send in a review for consideration. But how will Gladys get to New York City to critique a restaurant–without her parents knowing? Don’t miss the fun!

All Four Stars is receiving many positive reviews. I wager that awards will follow. Also following, a sequel is already in the works!

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Manuscript Similarities

I was at a writing workshop once with a woman who had been working on a picture book manuscript for years. She was a full-time professor at a university, if I remember correctly. Her manuscript was a biography of a famous person, but from a point of view that was unique. At least, I thought it was unique. A couple of years later, a book from that exact perspective, on that same individual, was published. My heart sank for the woman I’d met at the workshop. Recently, no less than four of my manuscript ideas / premises have been successfully published by other authors. quill-and-candle-1.jpgI’ve worked on my manuscripts with a writing coach and then a writing mentor, taken them to critique groups, had them critiqued by professionals at SCBWI conferences, and revised, revised, revised. They finally felt polished and ready, so I’ve begun the process of sending them out to agents and publishers. And then, in Horn Book or in our library children’s literature e-newsletter, or on blog posts, I’ve come across books recently published that, at first glance, are my stories. Each time, my breath caught between a gasp and a sob and my heart broke. — Then, I got back to work. I went to the library and checked out the books, one by one. Yes. There are similarities, but more differences. Each author took the story down sundry paths but not the paths I had chosen. The stories share some similarities, but are not at all the same. Will an agent or publisher give my manuscripts a long enough look, a chance? After all, I’ve often heard that there are only so many stories, so we need to find a fresh angle, a quirky character, an original, imaginative take on the theme. I think I have. So off the manuscripts go, with love and hope. Congratulations to the authors who have succeeded!

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One Candle – A Review

One Candle is an awe-inspiring example of Eve Bunting‘s ability to deal with painful or difficult realities in a gentle, honest manner, all while she touches the heart with hope. This picture book tells the story of a Jewish family gathering to celebrate Hanukkah, as seen through the eyes of one of the children. There is an added tradition in this family. One CandleGrandma brings a potato which sits on a plate in the center of the table all through the meal. Then, she hollows out the center of the potato and tells the story of how, while prisoners in the concentration camp of Buchenwald, she and her sister, Great-Aunt Rose, stole just such a potato from the kitchen where they were made to prepare meals for the guards. With a little stolen butter and a thread from Rose’s skirt placed in a hollow she’d carved out of the potato, and with a stolen match, they made a candle in their barracks on the first night of Hanukkah. “It lifted us to the stars,” Grandma says. And so the family makes a candle from the potato Grandma brought, light it and place it in the front window of the house, to honor being strong in the bad time, to remember in the good time, and for the women “who didn’t live to come out.”

“L’chayim,” Grandma says. “To life!” Raising a glass of wine or grape juice, each one in the family says, “To life!”

The words of this story are illustrated with extraordinary tenderness by K. Wendy Popp. She used children and adults in her community and family as models for the characters in the story, much as Norman Rockwell often did in his paintings. Ms. Popp captures authentic expression and emotion on every page.

Clearly, Eve Bunting and K. Wendy Popp are masters in their respective crafts.


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